I have made a drastic update to the first paragraph in part four of The Parable of the Gym. Thank you for the comment and collaboration, Rich! The change has to do with the motivation for beginning new church work. The first edition was a bit more cynical than Rich and I have experienced in our own realities.
So give it another read, and see what you think of the changes as well as the overall feel. Click below to tie-in.
I will be posting some updates about hopes for publishing soon.
If you haven't read parts 1-3 of the Parable of the Gym, poke around the site and check them out. They are one piece in the novel.