Saturday, April 4, 2009

BREAKERS Chapters ONE through FOUR

Thanks for the patience. Here is the fourth chapter of Breakers.

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Well, let me know what you think.

Peace to you.


Zee said...

i've already mentioned it over the Skype, but to those who have not had an opportunity to read chapter 4 yet - please do - the story about breakfast is utterly hilarious :)))

thanks for making me laugh, David.

Jamie H Davis said...

Zee: Do you mean about the breakfast "special"?

Zee said...

Jamie: yup :))) grapefruit with jam...)))

david said...

OOOOOPS! :~) I just had a friend point out a character name that needed changed. Remember I wrote this 7 or 8 years ago, or more. At that time Jon Stewart wasn't a popular name...and it is now. My apologies for using his name with such a dark character. Jon in the book is now Jon Steele. (Let me guess...that is a famous person too.)

Zee said...

heh, David, Jon Steele is quite a popular name as well - one wrote a book (War Junkie), another one's a photographer (link), another one's a musician (his myspace) :-D

my guess would be to write a disclaimer like "the names are purely coincidental and are not connected with any real-life persons"