Monday, April 20, 2009

Breakers: Fifth Chapter! Link below.

Yesterday I was able to spend quite a bit of time writing, and today a friend and I proofed the next chapter of Breakers. So here it is.

As always, let me know of errors. This is fresh, so you will find them.

Hope you enjoy the fifth chapter, and if you haven't read Breakers yet, then all five chapters are here.

I like the way two world views are juxtaposed in the lead characters of the story. I'd love your comments.



Jamie H Davis said...

Thanks for chapter five! I LOVED reading Cam's thoughts about God and the church.

The cliffhanger at the end of the chapter leaves me wanting more!


Jamie H Davis said...

Bring on chapter six!! :)