Thursday, March 12, 2009

BREAKERS: Chapter One

Well, this is bold. Only because we are in "wait mode" for The Runaway Pastor to be marketed, do I introduce a book I've started, lost much of (due to a hard-drive crash) and put away for years.

Breakers is the first book I wrote. I hope I've gotten better since I wrote this--and yes, I've edited a bit as I've typed it back into the laptop. I do love the people of the story. They are kind of like friends I met seven or eight years ago, and always wondered how their story ended. Maybe you can help me decide.

I'm certain there will be multiple/many/a lot of editing errors. But here you go. It's a short chapter, but it is a start. And after posting, I'm heading for a night away with Shelly.

BREAKERS is here----
http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=dhdr3wvs_16hm8czqd2

If you like it, spread the word! You may need another chapter though.

Peace to you!
David

3 comments:

Zee said...

oooooh, the suspense of the last sentence (of the book)! love the beginning and the characters (well, except Harkens :)))

one thing i wondered however... how can you trade shoes for a beach chair? :D

looking forward for more ;)

Zee said...

btw, may i be nosy and ask which part of former USSR did Cam visit? :)))))))

david said...

Check it again Zee. A little editing happened while you weren't looking. I needed to be a bit more familiar with the setting there...grin.

It is taking me forever to find 3 minutes to type in more. But I've looked ahead, and I really like this. I think it'll be fun if I can ever get it re-entered...plus edited as I go.

Peace!